A rewrite of this essay is required as it did not meet the standards of the lecturer.
The original work will be attached and please find the feedback here:
“The militarization of the U.S. border is a potentially promising topic in terms of an investigation pertaining to the key themes, issues and analytical lenses explored in this module.
However, your essay barely touches on what the militarization of the border entails – much less the complex social processes that have made this process seem necessary, desirable and/or legitimate. There is no definition of militarization provided and the discussion of constructivism is quite removed from the issue at hand. Several sections are repetitive and/or of limited relevance to an understanding of the militarization of the border. There is a lack of meaningful engagement with module readings, module discussions and other readings pertinent to the specific topic. There is also next to no evidence provided to support your points.”
I would appreciate it if this essay could rewritten to the standards that are satisfactory to attain around a B. I will happily discuss anything that is required in order to help you meet these standards.
Main fixes:
Going through the comments from the turnitin report and fixing
Adjusting Referencing to match academic standards, adding more references in that could provide better definitions
Reducing the repetitiveness of the essay whilst still sticking to the 2000 word limit (excludes bib)
Add in a paragraph with a strong academic definition of militarization
Any further questions do not hesitate to ask, the original word document and turnitin report are attached
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